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diff --git a/help/C/privacy-policy.page b/help/C/privacy-policy.page
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--- a/help/C/privacy-policy.page
+++ b/help/C/privacy-policy.page
@@ -9,21 +9,27 @@
     <section id="google-information-storage">
       <title>Information Shotwell Stores and Transmits About You</title>
       <p>The Shotwell Connect application and its data store reside locally on your personal computer.</p>
-      <p>During the course of its operation, Shotwell Connect may store an authentication token that it receives from YouTube and Google Photos on your computer. This authentication token is simply a session-identifying sequence of letters and numbers. It contains no password, user name, or other personal information.</p>
-      <p>At no time does Shotwell Connect transmit any information to the GNOME foundation, the Software Freedom Conservancy or any of the developers of the Shotwell Connect Application for Google services.
-      </p>
+      <p>During the course of its operation, Shotwell Connect may store an authentication token that it receives from YouTube and Google Photos on your computer. This authentication token is simply a session-identifying sequence of letters and numbers. It contains no password, user name, or other personal information.
+      This authentication token can be deleted by logging out of the service, or, if Shotwell Connect is not available anymore, by navigating to your system's credential store and removing it manually.</p>
+      <p>You can also revoke access to any Google service at any time by visiting <link href="https://security.google.com/settings/">https://security.google.com/settings/</link>.
+         If you opt to revoke the access by using the link above, the stored token will removed upon next use.</p>
+      <p>At no time does Shotwell Connect transmit any information to the GNOME foundation, the Software Freedom Conservancy, any of the developers of the Shotwell Connect Application for Google services or any other third-party.</p>
       <p>For Google's own privacy policy, please refer to <link href="https://policies.google.com/privacy">https://policies.google.com/privacy</link></p>
     </section>
     <section id="google-youtube">
     <title>YouTube</title>
     <p>Shotwell uses the YouTube API services <link href="https://developers.google.com/youtube">https://developers.google.com/youtube</link> for accessing your YouTube channel and upload the videos.</p>
+    <section id="google-youtube-data">
+      <title>Data obtained from your YouTube account</title>
+      <p>The only data retrieved from your YouTube account is your YouTube user name. The user name will be used during the upload procedure only and not stored permanently anywhere.</p>
+    </section>
     <section id="google-youtube-terms">
       <title>YouTube terms and permissions</title>
       <p>By using Shotwell to access YouTube, you agree to be bound to the YouTube Terms of Service as available at <link href="https://www.youtube.com/t/terms">https://www.youtube.com/t/terms</link></p>
     </section>
     <section id="google-youtube-permissions">
       <title>Permissions you grant Shotwell for YouTube</title>
-      <p>By using Shotwell, you grant the Shotwell Connect application permission to publish videos to your YouTube channel. Other than uploading videos, Shotwell does not insert, modify or remove any information from your YouTube account and channel.
+      <p>By using Shotwell, you grant the Shotwell Connect application permission to publish videos to your YouTube channel. Other than uploading videos, Shotwell does not insert, modify or remove, store or share any information from your YouTube account and channel.
       </p>
     </section>
     </section>
@@ -31,7 +37,7 @@
       <title>Google Photos</title>
       <p>Shotwell uses the Google Photos API services <link href="https://developers.google.com/photos/">https://developers.google.com/photos/</link> for all interaction with your Google Photos data</p>
       <section id="google-photos-permissions">
-        <title>Permissions you Grant Shotwell for Google Photos</title>
+        <title>Permissions you grant Shotwell for Google Photos</title>
         <p>By using Shotwell, you grant the Shotwell Connect application to publish photos on your Google Photos account. It will download the list of available albums to allow you to chose an existing album to upload to, it can create albums on your behalf. Other than creating albums and uploading photos, Shotwell does no modification whatsoever to the existing data on Google Photos
         </p>
       </section>